I am a Year 6 student at Edmund Hillary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 9 and my teacher is Roya. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Kia ora, It's Azalea Your creation is impeccable. When I read your post I liked how you told me what you were learning about. Next time you could tell me why you were learning about https://pixlr.com/x/ Do you like playing roblox?
Kia Ora, its Shzstela from Kaikohe West School. I really like how you like playing roblox and I thought you did awesome in posting it.But I think you need to describe. roblox more in writing.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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When I read your post I liked how you told me what you were learning about.
Next time you could tell me why you were learning about https://pixlr.com/x/
Do you like playing roblox?
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DeleteKia Ora, its Shzstela from Kaikohe West School. I really like how you like playing roblox and I thought you did awesome in posting it.But I think you need to describe. roblox more in writing.
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ReplyDeleteHi this is Sione.I Like Your Friends In Roblox And I thought your post like your gonna play a game with with your friends.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora I am Tiannah. I am soo surprised that you put me in the picture!. I love playing roblox with you! And being friends. Great editing!
ReplyDeletethank you Tiannah and I love playing roblox with you to.
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